A terrifying thought:
Is your message scaring away customers?

A cautionary tale on ghoulish messaging

Ravenna leaned back in her ergonomic desk chair, checking her email inbox yet again. Nothing. Not a new prospect or return customer in sight. She reached into the jack-o’-lantern bowl on her desk and grabbed a piece of candy. She groaned when she saw it was molasses taffy. She truly was cursed.

Unbeknownst to her, Ravenna was being haunted by four message strategy demons.

Vain — Nobody likes a bragger. But Ravenna focused on her company instead of her customers. Boo!

Vague — Confusion doesn’t convert. She didn’t realize that long sentences and clichés were making customers ghost her.

Dull — You can’t bore people into buying. Instead of telling a story, Ravenna’s rambling copy was a nightmare.

Undisciplined — Erratic behavior is untrustworthy. She often forgot to update her website, and SEO was a sphinx to her.

The quadruple message strategy curse can be horrifying. It’s the opposite of what makes a message effective. Fortunately, Ravenna can banish these demons for good. And so can you.

“If your message has a negative effect, then you are actively investing in undermining yourself. It’s the best money your competition never spent.”
– Sheperd Simmons, Counterpart

The trick is to start with a message strategy treat

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